Tuesday, February 9, 2021

A Fraction of Utopia

 

THE OLD GREY HOUSE

 

The old grey house sat on the hill.

Now Mr. and Mrs. John or Johanna Q. Public what do you think of my opening line?”

            Personally, I’m yawning already, putting myself to sleep like a semantic glass of warm milk, trickling down my gullet, or a soft feathered linguistic pillow as I collapse into its cushioned caressing wonderfulness, bored to tears!”

A long weaving path led to the old grey house that sat on the hill.

“Marginally better, but it leaves much to be desired, as would anything that aspires to a utopian image or thought, pilfered from the divine and trapped in the physical world of imperfect description. Think of a bright tropical, fluorescent, neon fish carefully netted and whisked away,  kidnapped for a wealthy customers aquarium and dumped unceremoniously into a tank losing its beauty, a  shadow of its true self when free in its proper environment, trapped in its translucent glass prison cell; or consider a diamond cutter’s stone cut and polished, not to perfection but, to the point at which the tradesperson can live with the results, a compromise to be lived with falling short of its  perfect utopian ideal gemstone, but good enough to satisfy the jeweler and dazzle the public; maybe a game of darts missing the bullseye, breaking a drinking glass, puncturing the wall or landing imperfectly on the perimeter or concentric circles of the dart board. The physical world creates hurdles, as in pens that run out of ink and pads of paper that run out of pages. A linguistic series of compromises rudely swiped from the divine and pulled down, packaged and presented in the physical world, a shadow of their true ideal meaning, a sellout, settled on to finish a manuscript and send it off to one’s publisher in return for payment of a contract and royalties in order to go out and buy more imperfect pens and an affordable finite amount of paper to repeat the process.”

A long weaving path led precipitously to the weathered, ramshackle old grey house that sat on the hill.

Another slight improvement but in the halls of Valhalla, Eden, Shangri-la or Elysium clear perfection of expression would be effortless. The printing house will definitely be sending a Page around soon, banging on my door for the next installment of my manuscript and I have already overspent from the sands of time in my personal hourglass on this sentence. I need to settle on it and move on…

 

 

Jim
Feb. 2020

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